Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Sonnets are frustrating...urgh....



I decided to use three transitional words: yet, but, and but
I did this because I am awesome

2 comments:

  1. Good poem, love your usage of vocab, interesting way of describing nature as disastrous. Like how you just added an l in ur couplet at the end :) Overall good job

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  2. 14 lines: 5/5
    Iambic pentameter (+ labels): 15/15
    Defined rhyme scheme (+ labels): 15/15
    A "turn": 5/5
    Overall feel: 10/10. I TOLD YOU you'd make it better :-) Nice fleur-de-lis reference. Nailed the bipolar feeling of weather.

    Total score: 50/50

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